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The Special
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 04:53:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love, an entanglement emotions wild
Liken for me I feel like a child
Logic and calculations gone with despair
Pumping heart, heavy breathing, a need for air
You do this to me the way I feel
For a hug and a kiss if I could steel
To know that you care just a bit
I am this nobody with a recording hit
To see you smile is a radiant glow
Making you happy and not on show
You are the special in my day
That pleases me in every way
On my mind in my heart a part of me
There is only one place I wish to be
And this ache I will always keep
My day without it is far to steep
To say I love you, I want to do more
To hold your hand and open the door
Give to you all that I can
To be the one you call your man.
Friday, 10 July 2009
11:30:08 AM
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Re: The Special
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 05:27:43 PM AEST
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Very good ending, nice work.
-Phil |
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Re: The Special
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by PreciousKitten on
Friday, 10th July 2009 @ 06:02:42 PM AEST
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| i like this one i really adore it. keep this up. |
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Re: The Special
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by manbeast on
Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 08:44:09 PM AEST
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| well done |
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