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Miles Between Us
Contributed by
manbeast
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Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 08:28:27 PM in AEST
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Tell me what is forever
can I have it right now
must I wait for tomorrow
and hide my sorrow somehow
Its years til together
and I must find my own way
goodbye never sounds easy
when youre wanting to stay
Seems I was never so lonely
and lonely nights pass slow
too many people came easy
they left me nothing to show
So many miles between us
you know the roads so long
and Im feeling so guilty
Ive got to right my wrong
Gonna build us a castle
hide behind stone walls
see nobody, no body
gonna answer no calls
Well be together forever
even when were apart
because Ill always remember
the tears I cried at the start
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manbeast
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2009-07-13 20:28:27]
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Re: Miles Between Us
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 13th July 2009 @ 08:46:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece of writing. I like the castle image you included.
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Re: Miles Between Us
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by hopelezz on
Tuesday, 14th July 2009 @ 05:56:57 AM AEST
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wow... what a nice poem... even-though it's so far.. loving the one that you love keeps stronger till the end..
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