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Tainted Taffy
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 14th July 2009 @ 12:00:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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The sweetness dies young;
Sticky taffy now poisoned.
Toxins kill childhood.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-14 00:00:31]
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Re: Tainted Taffy
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 14th July 2009 @ 02:35:52 PM AEST
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Great poem
But some would blame this on the parents
though for not watching their kids well enough which for some is true but for most it's not their fault
I'm what you would call a child of today or at least I'm not far from it I'm clean as are my friends
So the way I see it even though some of the kids today make the wrong choices there is a few who make the right ones and in that I see some hope
again great write
hope to read more soon
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Re: Tainted Taffy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th July 2009 @ 05:12:57 AM AEST
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a good haiku.
-phil |
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