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Charm And Poison
Contributed by
April90
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Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 04:28:44 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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For every wrong step that you take
I pierce your heart thrice on a bender.
However, my fury is fake.
You bleed your remorse - I surrender.
My sharp poignant words of no shame
And spirits are such a bad mixture -
I've never been easy to tame -
They paint such a frightening picture,
They certainly prove me a b**ch -
It's one of my two real faces.
You'll find charm and poison in each,
Once trapped in my tender embraces.
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April90
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2009-07-16 04:28:44]
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Re: Charm And Poison
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 12:57:27 PM AEST
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This is high quality stuff. Beauty mixed in with some punchy, biting description. I particularly liked this bit:
My sharp poignant words of no shame
And spirits are such a bad mixture -
I've never been easy to tame -
very good indeed.
-Phil
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