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Approaching Zero
Contributed by
roBodesign
on
Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 12:15:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Light slices through consciousness
White light, nothing, all encompassing light
Shapes that should exist don't
Forms refused to be, nothing
Taste, a single block of something
No substance feel or form
Scents flow and form around a hollow void
Defying perception, shapeless
Listen, something, nothing
Vast infinite emptiness
Finite reverberations overwhelm
An echo returns unheard
Unsupported awareness
No framework, no pattern
Virtual zero, overwhelming
Total blinding emptiness
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2009-07-16 12:15:25]
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Re: Approaching Zero
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lele on
Thursday, 16th July 2009 @ 12:56:27 PM AEST
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Dispite the lack of rythm verse ( but specialy rimes), I thought your poem's content very different and original. It's not so easy to see a poem to talk about it. You are very daring and though for doing it (with antithesis complexs words).
Congratulations.
Bye, bye
Leandro Monteiro |
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