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Words to Leave You With
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 08:28:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Melancholic
tears
You left your sins on the table
Dulcet
dreamy
Wanting words to caress you
Trepidating
heartbeats
Full of fear and envy
Speechless
irony
leaving me without words
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Fading smiles
fingerprints
can you stay for awhile?
One hand on your heart
the other feeling air
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-07-17 08:28:47]
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Re: Words to Leave You With
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 08:42:14 AM AEST
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| this is really good. . . incredibly sublime. . . soothingly subtle. . . great read. :) elle |
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Re: Words to Leave You With
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 09:24:02 PM AEST
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| Very, uh, elusive. Me likes. :-) |
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Re: Words to Leave You With
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 09:26:09 PM AEST
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I forgot to type, I absolutely love this line:
You left your sins on the table
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Re: Words to Leave You With
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 08:36:05 AM AEST
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a mesmirising piece. Immaculate.
-phil |
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