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Same ol'
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 08:08:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Same ol' words ..... different rhyme. same ol' me ..... different time same ol' street ......different town same ol' circus .... different clown same ol' song ..... different tune same ol' us ...... different views same ol' people ..... different crowd same ol' whisper ..... just too loud same ol' laughter .... different joke same ol' work ..... different yoke same ol' cause ....... different fight same ol' bed .... different night same ol' wisdom ...... different choice same ol' rhyme ....... different voice same ol' longing ..... different fears same ol' eyes ...... different tears same ol' feeling .... different room same ol' me ..... different you
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Re: Same ol'
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 17th July 2009 @ 09:14:29 PM AEST (User
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wow a sight for sore eyes! I have missed you.
I also loved this write and I relate to it believe me I do!
Huggers
Michelle |
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Re: Same ol'
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 06:22:53 AM AEST (User
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I really enjoyed this, it just flows & moves you right along. . . seems simple but goes so deep. Great! :) elle |
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Re: Same ol'
(User Rating: 1 ) by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 18th July 2009 @ 07:31:58 PM AEST (User
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Great poem. I love the simple clarity with this format.
--Heidi |
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Re: Same ol'
(User Rating: 1 ) by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 01:43:40 AM AEST (User
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Brilliant!!! Love your flow!! Simplicity and style!! Keep up the good work!! Keep posting!!!!! Keep Writing!!
Peace & Hugz!!
PepperMint Ki$$e$ |
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