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excerpt
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 06:35:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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still. . .
there is that one thing. . .
a tiny scar of passage
resembling teardrop,
fallen
it is etched
into the layer of my heart
known only as ache
I found it there, apparent
by accident, one day
tettering between
a thought
& a memory of you
a pleasantry. . .
for my grief
turned misery
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-07-21 06:35:47]
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Re: excerpt
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 07:01:39 AM AEST
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elle,
beautiful and succint capture of the moment, the human experience - your words led to an involuntary recollection of same. Powerful stuff to insinuate in a few lines of recall.
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Re: excerpt
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 01:05:05 PM AEST
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| Moving. You are an amazing writer the way each word goes so far. I am nearly brought to tears here remembering someone I lost. Truly amazing! |
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Re: excerpt
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by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 09:02:20 PM AEST
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That is great Elle.. with all the lost surrounding me over the past year, this write touched me and made me a little upset.
You have a beautiful talent for writing.
Tim |
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Re: excerpt
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 10:36:34 PM AEST
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| This , my dear, is excellent !!! |
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Re: excerpt
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 10:53:13 AM AEST
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| great write, as always for you. |
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