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Rocket Racing
Contributed by
KeyboardPlayer
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Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 08:10:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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Go! Go! Go! The race was on!
Many many racers one had won!
Faster faster and faster!
You think youre better than the master?
Left! Right! Left again!
They fly like girls you call these men?
Higher! higher! Into the sky !
Wow those rockets pilots really know how to fly!
Faster than the speed of sound!
Engine caught on fire went right to the ground!
Rocket sped up and passed me!
How is this? How did he flee?
Faster youre too slow
Come on go go go!
Closer to the finish line I could hear the crowd cheering!
There was a cute girl with a shiny pearl earring!
I could see the finish line!
Closer! Closer to the big sign!
Nervous, the hair on my arm rose up!
Spilled water from my very new cup!
Crossed the finish line!
But wait did this poem rhyme?
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Re: Rocket Racing
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 09:37:16 AM AEST
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| I dig the rhyming, I can feel the excitement and anticipation |
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