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Flashflood
Contributed by
Ambivalence
on
Tuesday, 21st July 2009 @ 08:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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From my lips, genuine smiles would emit, I once thought, but my grins have only been a faade. I pathetically ask God to wash away this affixed frown on my face. However, He simply cannot because that would contradict His so called plot.
For me, it has been written
Every seasonal, heavy downpour that shall fall from the cloudy sky is nothing compared to the daily tears that shall fall from his weary eyes.
He shall put forth an ill-fated flashflood of sadness drowning any high hopes of happiness. It shall plow right through any barriers, and all land shall be buried below the sea.
Survivors of this disaster, if any, should consider themselves lucky because he along with many others were destined to drown in frowns.
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Re: Flashflood
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 12:35:32 PM AEST (User
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very nice, some good imagery.
-Phil |
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Re: Flashflood
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 12:52:24 AM AEST (User
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Heavy!!!....a good angle and well written. I like this one alot. |
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