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Over Your Shoulder
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 08:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Daring to feel pain,
I look over your shoulder.
Blinding truth stares back.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-22 20:28:08]
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Re: Over Your Shoulder
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by hopelezz on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2009 @ 10:19:09 PM AEST
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wow... lies can destroy any truths and promises..
that's why we need to sacrifice..
great poem...
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Re: Over Your Shoulder
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 01:03:13 AM AEST
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What if you need to lie to preserve that trust?
then again you don't deserve the trust in the first place if you've done something worth lying about
Worth pondering over what do you do. do you tell the truth and hope they will understand or lie trying to protect the trust you convent so much and burden yourself with the lie forever....needs more thought
Great poem you've given me something I love
something to think about
thank you
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Over Your Shoulder
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 05:54:23 AM AEST
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very simple, very nice,.
-phil |
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