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You and I, No Blue in the Sky
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 23rd July 2009 @ 05:07:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am a selfish, fading person
I am a loving, caring person
I want to break up a pill
and force myself to feel better.
Could we go
and lay in a field of poppies?
I'd love to feel you touching me
when I've lost the blue in my sky
All I do is wonder
where are you tonight?
My sleepy eyes don't want to worry
if you are alright.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2009-07-23 17:07:10]
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Re: You and I, No Blue in the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 04:43:24 PM AEST
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A very passionate write. I particularly liked this bit:
Could we go
and lay in a field of poppies?
I don't really know why I liked that bit in particular, it just struck a chord with me somehow.
-phil |
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Re: You and I, No Blue in the Sky
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 05:46:38 PM AEST
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| I think this is really sad....but I thought it was superb. Well done. |
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Re: You and I, No Blue in the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th August 2013 @ 12:11:49 AM AEST
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| I really really like this poem! |
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