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Weep for the Broken
Contributed by
FragileStrength
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Friday, 24th July 2009 @ 05:27:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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I went to a crime scene today, not knowing it was yours. Your body was on the side of the road a broken spirit on all fours.
I couldn't believe it was you, the sight made me unable to breathe. I listened to my heart break knowing I had to leave.
Your body lay there mangled and torn by some type of machine. It left me wondering to myself, all because of what I had seen.
Did you feel it before death or did you feel nothing at all? I'd rather pretend you didn't, to make up for what I saw.
Everyone will see you, but noone seems to care. They choose to keep on living, with no regrets, and it isn't fair.
But I will always remember you no matter how much pain i have to keep. Others just see another dead animal but I see your beauty, and it makes me weep.
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Re: Weep for the Broken
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 06:40:38 AM AEST (User
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A fluid poem with many vivid images; good work.
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