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farewell
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
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Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 05:24:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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For years I have hated you,
I'm sure you already knew.
I yell and I scream and I fight.
I try to hurt you with all of my might.
But for years I could do nothing,
Because u never cared about me or anything.
But today I look at you and I grin.
For today I know that I will win.
It wasnt enough to just despise,
I couldnt keep hiding behind these lies,
For some reason I have always wanted u to care,
But no matter what u were never there.
So if u wont be what I need u to be,
Then today is the last u will see of me.
I told u this but it had no effect,
U merle thought it was an empty threat.
So I'm leaving today, goodbye, farewell,
Wont see u again till I see u in hell.
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hardcoreputa
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2003-03-29 17:24:29]
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Re: farewell
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 11:19:21 AM AEST
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| well i'm glad you got that out of your system, it would'nt do you any good keeping it in, its a great poem, the honest raw antagonism in it is frightening, it'll probably do you and the people its directed at some good to experience a bit of space from one another |
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Re: farewell
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 04:10:11 PM AEST
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| this is cool, i like dark poetry, im also a dark poet.... x x x |
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