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The last breath
Contributed by
bubkin
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Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 08:15:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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its a strange feeling this one in my heart
the same one i felt everytime we were apart
and when we were together i felt such pride
the love i have for you i cannot hide
you have been gone now for nearly a year
and not a day goes by when i dont shed a tear
my life was perfect with u around
and now ure away and i wish u had been found
the soft lapping of the cold blue sea
the very thing that took you away from me
Its gently hitting againt my skin
there is nothing left to do now , i cannot win
its slowly surrounding me and a feel no fear
because i know in time , i will find you near
as i take my last breathe i can hear your sighs
and as i sink to the bottom i just close my eyes
your hand around mine as my last breath escapes
and we're walking together through the pearly gates
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bubkin
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2009-07-25 08:15:41]
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Re: The last breath
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 07:57:53 PM AEST
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Again, I'm so sorry for your loss.
Welcome to our global family here at YPDC.
Great writing.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: The last breath
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by thesweetestsin65 on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 09:11:11 PM AEST
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| this is absolutely beautiful! |
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