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pain of love
Contributed by
bubkin
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Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 08:40:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So far from me but still make me smile
If only i could be near you , just for a while
My hand in you hand you will hold me so tight
I care nothing for tomorrow i live for tonight
you are my world , my stars and even my moon
i hope i can be with you , and in your arms so soon
there is no one in this world who can love me like you
when u finally ask , i can only say " i do "
I will love you forever , no one can tear us apart
I'll always hold you dear in my my heart
all i desire is to be close to you
when im far away from you i feel so empty and blue
To hear you're voice would be the sweetest sound
when i loook into your eyes im lifted off the ground
please tell me you will never stop loving me
those simple words " i love you " will set my heart free
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bubkin
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2009-07-25 08:40:15]
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Re: pain of love
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by Shuberth on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:30:43 PM AEST
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this is so cute great and awesome, and i cannot believe that there are hardly any comments on this lovely poem.
i loveeeeeeeeee it so much and i voted 5 stars :) |
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Re: pain of love
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 04:40:47 PM AEST
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Very romantic piece capturing how love truly feels. Amazingly written.
--Heidi |
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Re: pain of love
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 04:40:51 PM AEST
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Very romantic piece capturing how love truly feels. Amazingly written.
--Heidi |
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