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my love
Contributed by
bubkin
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Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 08:44:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love is a wonder, my love is the one.
I know this is true, my heart beats like a drum.
My love makes me happy, makes me smile again.
He takes away all the badness, even the pain.
It fills me with pride, just to stand at his side.
It fills me with hope when he tells me love is no joke.
If it werent for him life would be so grim,
Every part of the day would just seem so grey.
So I pray to the angels to the skies above,Bring me my darling, my one true love.
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bubkin
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2009-07-25 08:44:10]
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Re: my love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 09:33:47 AM AEST
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Lovely writing, good work.
-Phil |
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Re: my love
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by ThePrince on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 10:48:59 AM AEST
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hi, good work, it's nice...I liked it.
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Re: my love
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by CharminglyAwkward on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 08:20:10 AM AEST
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| aww this is soo true, having love in your life makes everything sunnier, less troublesome, easier to wake up to every morning. who are we without it? =) |
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