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Hey, John, how do you like your Macabre? Medium rare or brutal?
Contributed by
tinathetalkingtaco
on
Saturday, 25th July 2009 @ 11:25:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The room choes with the sound of screams,
flowing like a dying stream.
Acid disturbed, disfiguring skin.
Teeth grinding on receeding gums.
Conciousness wearing thin.
Heart pounding like the beat of a drum.
Instruments of pain glisten in your blazing eyes.
Knife shreds the thread-bound wrists.
Proceeding upwards, paralyzed.
Scalpel at hand, fingers twist.
Undergo ripping the cuticle and nail.
blood trickling, turn one-eighty degrees.
Complexion runs pale.
Amnesia, unable to please.
Drill rusty and unsteril,
Used for a most productive peril.
Your mind flashing in your optical view.
Noise overflows in voice and music.
Looking around, it was a grim milieu,
Enough to make you sick.
The swirling ready drill drew near.
Flinching as a forlorn sign.
Touching, shriveling, twisting fear.
Flesh grinds, destroyed rfom the drills occupation.
Twisting into one, ripped apart, revealing muscle and bone.
Organs shown, bones turn to dust and mere memories.
Cryptic words align on your tongue.
Body motionless and numb.
Leaving the shady corpse in morgues wake.
Only your soul meant to break.
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tinathetalkingtaco
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2009-07-25 11:25:15]
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Re: Hey, John, how do you like your Macabre? Medium rare or brutal?
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 11:24:24 PM AEST
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This is dark.
But, I like it. Quite a bit. It felt real when I was reading it..
Good job(:
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Re: Hey, John, how do you like your Macabre? Medium rare or brutal?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 02:05:19 AM AEST
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Dark and gory, just the way I like it! Fiction that is...
I don't think I could work in a morgue.
The detailed imagery makes the poem seem very authentic.
Good stuff! |
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