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Epiphany
Contributed by
Red_Silo
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Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 08:36:12 PM in AEST
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Epiphany
Loving you
It makes me something new.
Love can come,
And love can go.
Thats what people say
How long will this last?
How long will you stay?
These are questions I ask myself,
Each and every day.
We have so much more than others can see.
The more they say,
The more I have to believe.
Of everyone Ive met,
And everyone Ive known,
Ive searched for someone such as you.
And I hope when you read this,
You can say that too.
If theres one thing you learn,
I just want you to know
It has finally paid off for us going so slow.
This isnt some kind of race.
Its not a type of game.
But the truth is...without you,
Im like a garden without rain.
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Re: Epiphany
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 11:30:45 PM AEST
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beautiful poem, i find taking it slow is the best way.
great write |
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Re: Epiphany
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 07:07:56 AM AEST
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"I’m like a garden without rain."
The imagery you use really hits home I like the way you repeated words in the 6th 7th and and 11th and 12th lines |
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Re: Epiphany
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th January 2006 @ 03:24:56 PM AEST
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| another poem i enjoyed reading. well done. |
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