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In Chains
Contributed by
fisherja
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Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 08:25:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As I look back at you as youre taken from me,
A shame filled tear eye is the last thing I see,
As I feel my heart wrench and then quiver then break,
From this bad dream will I never awake?
This giant before me stands shackled and bound,
A break in the silence as my tear hits the ground,
The injustice has been passed as the judge closes dock,
Animals to the cage, our dear Queens livestock.
J
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2009-07-26 08:25:25]
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Re: In Chains
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by CharminglyAwkward on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 08:28:40 AM AEST
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| i liked the imagery in this, sometimes that lacks in poetry when people just write what they feel and dont put any thought into it. the last two lines added something special. good job. |
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Re: In Chains
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by CharminglyAwkward on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 08:29:25 AM AEST
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| the last 4 lines i meant. |
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