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Midnight Umbrella - Denial
Contributed by
PoluxTheFifth
on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 09:14:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Dont want to love you,
or fall into rainbows of endless light,
or crash into mornings of bluish wings,
or kiss the sun, or dance, or fly.
Dont want to love you,
or call on your name in the midst of night,
or silence the ocean to hear you, shy;
or close the door, or pray, or shine.
Dont want to love you,
or sing the confessions of my lost mind,
or bring the pretentions of my desire,
or stay, or watch, or smile.
Dont want to love you,
or rain upon your face like sweet wine,
or say the forgiveness that heals my life,
or sleep, or try, or fight.
Dont want to love you,
but Im lost in the deep of your dreaming eyes;
I have no reason, I cannot hide,
I already love you, when will my heart be mine?
Copyright ©
PoluxTheFifth
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2009-07-26 09:14:04]
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial
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by elle on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 10:23:45 AM AEST
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| I love this! :) elle |
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 03:30:24 PM AEST
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Wow. Stunning metaphors and a lovely elegance too. This is how poetry should be written. 5/5.
-phil |
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial
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by bubkin on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 03:48:32 PM AEST
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| this is true poetry , u r very talented x |
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial
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by PoluxTheFifth on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 03:50:59 PM AEST
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Thanks for your lovely comments.
I´m an english teacher in Colombia, South America.
English is my second language.. I learned it by myself, so please, forgive any mistake. |
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial
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by ming on
Sunday, 26th July 2009 @ 05:15:07 PM AEST
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| I agree with everyone else...this is GREAT poetry. Can't wait for more!! |
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 07:43:35 PM AEST
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I concur with Elle.
This line is classic... love it:
but I´m lost in the deep of your dreaming eyes
Welcome to YPDC.
Tim
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Denial
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 06:19:57 AM AEST
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I was referred to your work by a friend and I'm so glad he did.
This is, simply put, stunning. It's been a long time since a piece on YPDC
moved me in this way. Every verse is like a gentle breeze that builds
in momentum to a gust of emotional overflow. It staggers the heart.
Absolutely beautiful.
~ Breezy
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