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Silent
Contributed by
poluxthefifth
on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 12:50:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Its a poison of love, a dark light shining upon my soul.
Whatever the day brings, I look for reasons to stop crying...
One melody, the sky, late night call.
You came to steal my happiness, Oh heartless king of jealousy...
you came to kill my hopes, Oh master of disappointment...
The air speaks your name, but my ears bleed and I cant hear it.
Enter the world of my blue days, and youll cry.
Will you have compasion, Creator of mine?
Will you dig inside the pain and heal the day?
I broke the wings of an angel, and Heaven claims for revenge
Who will save me from this my deserved damnation?
I believe in love. I believe.
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poluxthefifth
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2009-07-27 12:50:23]
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Re: Silent
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 01:41:17 PM AEST
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Nicely written. Your words do a beautiful job of conveying your sorrow. I am sorry for any pain you are experiencing. I am sorry you didn't like my Corset of Conformity haiku. I sometimes find haikus more challenging because you only have three lines to express a complex idea. I enjoy your writing and look forward to reading more.
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Re: Silent
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 06:53:57 PM AEST
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Intense write, I feel the pain within each word.
I loved the words you used, veryu epressive.
Michelle |
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