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Last lines
Contributed by
poluxthefifth
on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 01:03:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Pale is the face of my sadness,
it seems youve condemned it to oblivion;
seems like your smile is stronger than fire
and burns away my old ties
New birds are singing above
Is it what they call love?
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poluxthefifth
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2009-07-27 13:03:23]
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Re: Last lines
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th July 2009 @ 07:50:03 PM AEST
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I have read all seven of your submissions tonight and I must say they are all excellent.
Thank you for joining YPDC. I hope to see more.
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Re: Last lines
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th August 2009 @ 06:37:08 AM AEST
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Oh, so exquisitely simple, but how adoringly breathtaking. You've
taken an ordinary subject and given it a new and inviting feel. Like
a fresh coat of paint on a dull wall, this poem brightens the notion
of falling helplessly and hopelessly into the moon.
Absolute wonderment!!
I concur with Timmy. Thank you so much for joining YPDC.
Please do not stop submitting.
~ Breezy
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