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A HIDDEN ROSE
Contributed by
Lele
on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 01:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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A rose, early in the garden,
Is, now, totally hidden
In her own spine
Wished, fearfully, by her
Wished by her who wants
To avoid the bees stings,
Wished by her who wants
To avoid humming-birds kisses
They that even know
How shes going on
If she is damaged,
By her petals taken out
By them, even without
Any malice desires.
The suns rises and lights
But the flower can see nothing.
She takes a few sun baths,
Even if there are few bugs
Disturb, tease or hurt her.
And, everyday its goes on
The sun rises
And rose doesnt see anything
Due to the spines used by her
And for her own confinement
They are her weapon to prevent
Any bite of any insects
Or even kisses can cure her.
We look at the rose
We dont know
If the spines will be taking
We dont know
If she will see the sunrise comes
We dont know
If she will find bugs or eagles
That can plant her life
That she wants to create and live.
Copyright ©
Lele
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2009-07-28 13:05:04]
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Re: A HIDDEN ROSE
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 02:53:33 PM AEST
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I love this piece. The imagery is magical. I find deep meaning with this hidden rose. I see a rose afraid to take chances and therefore stays hidden. Again your writing is an inspiration.
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