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Midnight Umbrella - Eyes on her
Contributed by
poluxthefifth
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Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Borne along by the crowd,
he came with a message from long ago.
Never complained about the rain,
he was a lonely lovely soul,
he only had eyes for Loraine.
Confused under daybreak,
dancing alone, so tender.
It was the kiss and the hope of a new day,
he only had eyes for Loraine.
She had an aura devoid of sadness,
a deluge of whites and pinks.
He only had his life and his days,
he only had eyes for Loraine.
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Eyes on her
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:50:02 PM AEST
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| again I love your poetry. . . my moms' name is Lorraine, which makes this feel special to me. smiles. elle |
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Re: Midnight Umbrella - Eyes on her
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 07:40:36 PM AEST
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A beautiful piece of writing. It bringsout the true romantic in my mind. I hope my true love only has eyes for me the way the guy has eyes for Loraine in this poem. Your writing is refreshing as the rain.
--Heidi |
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