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Wimpy Weapons
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 08:42:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You graze me with an indifferent dart;
the true target is forgotten art.
You squirt me with a dripping water gun;
it is too much effort to simply fill one.
You pierce my heart with a bladeless butter knife;
it is as if you have forgotten the passion in life.
You tie me up with a tired piece of twine;
it feels like all romance has become sublime.
You drug me with a pathetic placebo;
it feels as though you chilled your love's glow.
Wimpy weapons just won't cut it in true love;
it's as useful as a fingerless glove.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-07-28 20:42:26]
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Re: Wimpy Weapons
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 09:56:25 AM AEST
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Great choice of words......I really liked the way this flowed.
Puzzles me why it hasn't received more comments as it deserves more
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Re: Wimpy Weapons
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 10:52:46 AM AEST
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| Me still a fan |
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Re: Wimpy Weapons
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by PoluxTheFifth on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 03:43:00 PM AEST
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| You really know about rhyme |
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