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I Fall
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 10:57:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I Fall
A Tender touch, making love is a must,
To kiss those lips, I place my hands on your hips,
I fall
Step into the shower, you might want to turn the music up a little louder,
Hot water and steam, your naked body and me,
I fall
Biology 101, this day cant end until the homework is done,
My lips study your every curve, a steamy silhouette do not disturb,
I fall.
You turn around and arch your back; in I go as you push back,
Buried to the hilt, I grab your hips and slowly the passion builds,
I fall
Like a piston steady and strong, in and out, in and out,
Steam fills the room as your hand drags across the steam covered glass,
I fall.
Run my tongue up your spine; take you on vacation to cloud nine,
In and out, in and out, the water runs as pressure begins to mount,
I fall..
The end is near, one last nibble on your ear,
I let go, your body shakes as your river flows,
I fall
You fall
We fall..In love.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2009-07-28 22:57:55]
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Re: I Fall
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by elle on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 06:33:52 AM AEST
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| Is it just me, or is it getting hot in here? waves hand in front of face, eyes glazed. . . oh yeah I'm commenting. . . This IS steamy! great verse. :) elle |
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Re: I Fall
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 08:42:01 AM AEST
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(LOL at Elle)
umphhhhh um yes I would say it is hot in here! I think you accomplished your goal we discussed in the pm LOL.
Serious again here, this poem is not only sensual, it is red hot on fire steamy. Well done well done my friend.
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Re: I Fall
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by LadyRose on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 11:25:31 AM AEST
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Yummeeeyyyyyyy!
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Re: I Fall
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 29th July 2009 @ 05:31:23 PM AEST
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Errrr Matt?? Is this you? Wow and then WOW again!!.. You certainly have rocked somebody's world!! Great write.....me likeeee...
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