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THE END
Contributed by
hottkornstar
on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I think about you, my love, my life,
How we were once together,
How we loved eachother,
But in my hand i take the knife.
I point the knife right at my heart,
And ponder what I'm doing,
I'm talking to myself,
Saying I did my part.
I laugh at this thought,
Stop myself I try,
Suddenly it's hopeless,
And I begin to cry.
The kninfe goes deeper into my skin,
The tears run down my face,
I wished so hard to turn back time,
But remembered the feeling of being misplaced.
I get weaker,
And I fall to the ground,
Everything goes blury,
And I can't hear a sound.
My voyage is through,
Everything's complete,
The feelings I had in my former life,
Are now so obsolete.
Copyright ©
hottkornstar
... [
2003-03-30 00:25:00]
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Re: THE END
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:42:22 AM AEST
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Really good! I have contemplated doing the same wow this was so vivid I can really relate to this. Thnx for sharing.
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Re: THE END
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:42:23 AM AEST
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Really good! I have contemplated doing the same wow this was so vivid I can really relate to this. Thnx for sharing.
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Re: THE END
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:42:24 AM AEST
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Really good! I have contemplated doing the same wow this was so vivid I can really relate to this. Thnx for sharing.
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Re: THE END
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by kevinblar on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 06:25:24 PM AEST
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| wow that was really great i liked it cuz i have contemplated it mayself only oi was gonna use a gun but thank you very much for sharing |
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