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A bit of me
Contributed by
doughnutman73
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Sunday, 2nd August 2009 @ 06:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Add a bit of me
A pinch of this
I find myself in this mess
Cover from head to toe
With white flour disappointed
At my feet, sweet sugary defeat
On the counter the oil anointed
Throw me in the oven, set to bake
Out will come a worldly mistake
For there is no way should these ingredients make a beautiful cake
But the heat burns all with fiery delight
And set all passed mistakes, right.
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2009-08-02 18:23:28]
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Re: A bit of me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 07:40:11 AM AEST
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Good poem; well put together and it rhymed well.
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