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Me vs. Myself
Contributed by
Legrand
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Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 09:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Solitaire is the game I'm playing
I've played many times before
there are rules to the game
one must have timing
composure
skill........
In this single player game
who wins?
If you lose, have you lost to yourself?
If you win, have you gained victory over you?
Clever? or Cruel?
Life is my solitaire
and I am the player
but this deck overwhelms me
my cards have scattered
I am left with the task of aligning these unruly cards
These cards are in no way favorable
the odds are against me
How is one supposed to concentrate?
when this deck is shuffled
but they require me
to play the hand I've been dealt
impossible suits left for me to arrange
Who dealt such mayhem?
a disarray of the deck..
no luck of the shuffle
no sequence in sight
why rob me
of the satisfaction of defeating my invisible opponent?
Its time for me to break the game.........
Yes! "End the game" says the Discontented player....
Copyright ©
Legrand
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2009-08-03 21:52:51]
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Re: Me vs. Myself
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 09:59:30 PM AEST
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Heartfelt write, I am so very sorry you are going through this, I do not know what to say to make it better either.
I will give you an air hug though
HUGS HUGS HUGS
Michelle |
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Re: Me vs. Myself
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by elle on
Monday, 3rd August 2009 @ 10:17:24 PM AEST
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| I come to be tested, everyday. This is great fuel for the fire. peace. elle |
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Re: Me vs. Myself
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by aidoman on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 12:50:57 AM AEST
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it is hard to realise but you are the only one it matters to when u beat yourself.
thats the point |
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Re: Me vs. Myself
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th August 2009 @ 04:25:48 AM AEST
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I think we all fight this battle to some extent.
This poem is very cleverly composed! |
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