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my son
Contributed by
tin
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Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 10:08:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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my son will grow tall
and be a handsom man
he'll run fast and hit hard
and have a gentle hand
he'll be better than you
and leagues better than me
he'll be smart and ambitious
and he'll make me proud
he'll give to the world
and have all the world will give
but my son never grew more than nine inches tall
and looked as all premature babies do
he was fast but too fast
and didn't have the strength to grip my finger
he never committed my sins
but never had a chance to learn from my mistakes
he smiled at me once
inbetween his tears
for a few hours he gave me the world
then took it with him as he departed
his eyes never opened
now mine can't close
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tin
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2009-08-08 22:08:57]
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Re: my son
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 10:19:07 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss.
This is a very touching.
Healing, blessings,
emy |
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Re: my son
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th August 2009 @ 11:51:36 PM AEST
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Makes you want to cry out, "why"?
I am so sorry for your loss.
I think you did really good considering how this must make you feel. I hope this helped, if even a little bit.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: my son
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by LadyRose on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 12:35:43 AM AEST
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| This is the most sweetest yet sadest poem I ever read.........so sorry for your lose aswell........God came to get His angel......... |
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Re: my son
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 03:30:50 AM AEST
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Powerful, moving, tear-jerking, and painful. A mother nor a father should ever have to lose a child. My heart is bleeding for you and your family. I'm so sorry for your loss.
The Phantom |
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Re: my son
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by dirk-velvet on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 08:18:26 PM AEST
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his visit was brief.
though long enough to leave you,
his wondrous gift.
( i wouldn't change ... a word. )
Peace&Love
to you.
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Re: my son
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by shelby on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 06:20:45 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for your loss. I cannot even imagine the pain. You wrote a very lovely and tender poem. I have tears in my eyes.
Hugs you tight
Michelle |
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