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The Veteran
Contributed by
Lonnie
on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 12:56:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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Beneath the wings of night where secrets hide he walks within another Asian dream feeding on what festers deep inside where enemies are seldom what they seem
The aging man reverts to ageless boy traumatized by things his mind must see using any means he can employ to hold at bay the sheer insanity
Horror often wears a friendly face slim-hipped girls who beckon with a smile yet fearing their nortorious embrace he snaps awake with urgent self-denial
Sweat-stained sheets accompany illusion evidence that soldiers seldom sleep merely shift realities to wander pathways of the past where visions creep
Nuturing by day a hope of sharing with someone else what only he can feel he sacrifices love for understanding and dreads what falling darkness might reveal
C. Lon R. Bruso
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Lonnie
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2009-08-09 12:56:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Veteran
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 03:51:37 PM AEST (User
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profound stuff here. soldiers have had
many sacrifices and scars, so i salute them!!
wen peace arrives, those past war scenes
wont haunt anymore...great write
take care
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Re: The Veteran
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 07:19:01 PM AEST (User
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You have captured such emotion in this poem. It is well written, I also understand the content, in more ways than one.
Bless you!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: The Veteran
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 06:52:19 AM AEST (User
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Crikey. This is an eye-opener. The silent torture of a forgotten soldier. How could somebody like me ever understand?
-Phil |
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