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Crimson Eyes
Contributed by
dissolvedlines
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Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 08:26:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Her eyes slide on the dark side
And can smell the fear in your breath
The sweat that slides down your skin
She can taste from a mile away
Tonight she seeks to drain you dry
And send you to the other side
To feed on your thoughts and flesh
Is her only desire and wish
She slowly licks and kisses
The smooth cold metal of the gun
A dark delight spreads in her eyes
The sweetness of death tonight
In the dark cold alleys and streets
She slides and seeks for your flesh
To send you to the land of the dead
With a quick bullet to the head
The taste of flesh on her tongue
Is like a drug that feeds and gives
Hunger swells inside her chest
The crave for crimson on white lips
In the shadows she quietly moves
And you dont hear her come
You feel her teeth deep in your flesh
Before you hear the sound of the gun.
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Re: Crimson Eyes
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 09:29:37 PM AEST
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Perfectly written. Excellent use of language and imagery.
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