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Falling Free
Contributed by
unholy_soldier
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
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Falling from the sky like a dragon without life,
Bellowing flame from its lifeless body consuming itself in fire,
Burning away all the pain it was so blessed with in life,
Falling free from its captive in death,
A foe struck the final blow,
Freeing a friend from the hate within,
The quest is at its end,
The strive for death,
Now the gift of life.
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2003-03-30 07:35:00]
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Re: Falling Free
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:12:13 AM AEST
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i love your imagery of the dragon, particularly the line: Bellowing flame from its lifeless body consuming itself in fire.
Beautiful.
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Re: Falling Free
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:28:10 AM AEST
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| powerful, visual imagery and effective juxtaposition - your message is clear within these emotive words. great write, i enjoyed the rest of your work, Kate x |
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Re: Falling Free
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 12:34:27 PM AEST
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| i read the poem without reading the note, then i read the note and it all made sense, its an amazing poem, the imagery and the ideas in it are just wonderful, oh yeah and the imagination is outstanding |
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Re: Falling Free
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:09:35 PM AEST
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excellent write...good imagery
Sharon |
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Re: Falling Free
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by SuicidalSon on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 09:40:03 AM AEST
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But the only real way to be free is to be dead
S.S. is J.F. |
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