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Broken Heart
Contributed by
brasco
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Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 09:26:30 PM in AEST
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She ripped his heart from his chest
And cast it to the ground
She said it was for he best
What goes around comes around
She claimed he hurt her first
That he was never true
So he deserved the worst
And her fury only grew
He pleaded dont think so ill
My heart was yours to keep
To do with what you will
I have sown so you could reap
Through her anger and her pain
His words she could not hear
Though his blood had left a stain
She did not seem to care
Finally he sat by a fallen tree to rest
Knowing his fate was surely sealed
And rolling toward sunset in the west
Was his broken heart congealed
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brasco
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2009-08-09 21:26:30]
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Re: Broken Heart
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 09:37:00 PM AEST
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Heart-breakingly beautiful piece; I can relate to it because I was cruel and did something similar to a guy because I wanted to get even for the heartbreak he caused. I wish I could take back my heartless actions. I love your writing. Superb piece.
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Re: Broken Heart
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by LadyRose on
Sunday, 9th August 2009 @ 11:48:06 PM AEST
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I can also relate to this piece.......makes one wonder...........unfortunately what goes around comes around,I experienced it first hand.
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Re: Broken Heart
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:29:50 PM AEST
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| i thought it was beautifully written and a touch sad |
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