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Set Me Free
Contributed by
Shuberth
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Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:10:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The pain inside me I cant stand
Why they ignore me now I understand,
As tears flow through my eyes and hit the floor
The happiness inside me is no more.
The dreams inside me are all gone
This Sorrow in my life is born.
I cant run, I see no another way
All I know is this pain will forever stay.
You stare at me you can hear me cry
You know what I feel and that I want to die
I love you Lord, but look at me
Look upon my life, Dont you have some pity ?
Dear God is it too much to ask ?
If I begged you will you complete this task ?
Bring my life to an end
With no more hope in a form of a fake friend.
As I pray right now
Please answers my prayer somehow
But dont take too long
Let me go to the place where I belong.
- Shuberth Dias -
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Re: Set Me Free
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by bubkin on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:35:49 PM AEST
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| This really speaks to the reader. full of raw emotion that pretty much comes through the screen to touch my heart . very good write x |
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Re: Set Me Free
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 10th August 2009 @ 02:46:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece full of emotion. I feel sorrow in each line. Excellent flow as well. I hope happiness comes back in your life. I am feeling very down today as well. Again great piece of writing.
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