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Emotional Submission
Contributed by
tin
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Tuesday, 11th August 2009 @ 12:30:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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sordid dreams of personal fantasy
cloud the words i think i hear
lies and slander leave your tounge
unseen forces keep me near
intentions aren't enough
if promises aren't kept
but your intentions will suffice
untill it's i you won't accept
you could break my heart time and again
i'll never fall out of line
untill the day you say it's over
your company i can't decline
damn this power you wield over me
and this pain you make me feel
untill you stop singing your siren song
i can only kneel
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tin
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2009-08-11 00:30:37]
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Re: Emotional Submission
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by ammar on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 02:56:35 AM AEST
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It happens in love, doesn't it?
But make sure you don't let it go too far. You would also want to feel valued after all.
Keep writing fine pieces.
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