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poem ( a little self)
Contributed by
orphani
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Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 06:40:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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the poem is your child,
birth pains and joy.
that little self-- more
you then you.
it takes off that monkey suit
the skin ,,,,,,,, and rises
to become ,,,,,,. that cloud
more miracle then hands created.
baby stepping into the,,,,,, oneness
of not me,,,,,, alone.
Copyright ©
orphani
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2009-08-12 06:40:38]
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Re: poem ( a little self)
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 08:23:28 PM AEST
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I love how you describe a poem. Very true indeed nice metaphor here.
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Re: poem ( a little self)
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 11:14:58 PM AEST
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Nice, I love this style very interesting.
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Re: poem ( a little self)
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 11:35:12 PM AEST
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So very true. I liked the first four lines wonderfully penned. God bless you.
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