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Love’s Thoughts
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 09:30:33 AM in AEST
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Loves Thoughts
The connection between us is so amazingly strong
The kind that lasts forever like a favorite song
Yet there is still so much more for us to share
We could not take this step if we did not truly care
Just to stand next to you would set my emotions in gear
The touch of your skin as we embrace so I can whisper in your ear
Telling you I will hold you tight as I gently kiss your cheek
Knowing that it may cause your knees to go weak
As you turn your face to me I softly kiss your lips
I knew you hid your passion, but did not expect it to feel like this
The wave of electricity that you sent through me hit with such speed
That it was me who was brought to their knees
As I hold you close I never want to let go
There are so many more things I want to know
What would it be like to walk with you in the rain?
What can I do to take away all of your pain?
I can only dream of what it would be like to make love with you
To be entwined in each others arms and the things we would do
To caress your body as we melt into one
As the rain ends and gives way to the sun
Our cries of passion echo through the trees
The heat from our bodies warms the gentle breeze
As we lay glistening in the light of the day
Love is meant to feel exactly this way
Deadwriter
08/12/2009
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Re: Love’s Thoughts
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 01:30:42 PM AEST
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Hi Dwriter, I can totally identify with this poem.
I can so understand those thoughts...
She's got to be one lucky lady...
Lovely write...
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Re: Love’s Thoughts
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 12th August 2009 @ 08:16:04 PM AEST
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Nicely written. I love this poem, especially the last two stanzas.
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Re: Love’s Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 03:57:29 PM AEST
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| This is a very passionate and beautiful poem. Great Job! |
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Re: Love’s Thoughts
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by shelby on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 04:04:20 PM AEST
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It is for my favorites I hang around YPDC these days and this is a delight to read as always. Makes me say ahhhhhhhhhhhh.
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Michelle |
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