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Untitled
Contributed by
LadyRose
on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 12:13:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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UNTITLED
My hand is itching,
what is it trying to tell me?
Having this urge to but it down on paper
a terrible painful urge.
A demand by my soul.
An order by my inner voice.
Obeying orders I pick up the pen
and try to destroy the paper.
Ingraving if with ink .
Composing words.
Formulating.
Describing.
Explaining.
Listing and discussing intimate thoughts
structured by my heart.
mixed with frustrastion ,fears
and a sense of pity on myself.
I still endure this emotion.
If words left spoken could only give as much pleasure and satisfaction.
Copyright ©
LadyRose
... [
2009-08-13 00:13:01]
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Re: Untitled
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by orphani on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 04:40:00 AM AEST
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i got drawn into this poem
it's complex
it expresses a conflicted personality
one pushing one pulling.
line three has word error
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Re: Untitled
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 05:26:03 AM AEST
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Powerful stuff
One of those poems that packs a lot in to a small space
Well done
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Re: Untitled
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 08:34:28 PM AEST
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Very beautifully and accurately described. I feel like writing definitely comes from an inner voice taking control. Terrific description here.
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