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To Herald Nocturnal Eve
Contributed by
gravehorn
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Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 10:38:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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When space with all its empty glow
Takes hold of daylight's shine
And from the shadows comes the moon
To cross that failing line,
The heavy lashes blink and close
As labour lends them weight
Until the darkness of the mind
Takes slumber as its mate.
Amid the vale of frosted sheets
Where phantoms dance and twirl
To cause a farce that night alone
More real than all the world,
The spectral giants show as needed
Arms bore open wide
In reverence to the traveller
Whose dream awaits inside.
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gravehorn
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2009-08-13 10:38:29]
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Re: To Herald Nocturnal Eve
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by orphani on
Thursday, 13th August 2009 @ 12:29:40 PM AEST
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great form and composition
solid depth of content
line twelve i feel weakens the flow and continuity of the composition as a whole
though.
a brooding dark revelry.
well done grave
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Re: To Herald Nocturnal Eve
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by ClayMan on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 03:30:51 AM AEST
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| Beautiful imagery here and a great portrait ainted with words! I liked it very much indeed. Well done! |
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Re: To Herald Nocturnal Eve
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by dirk-velvet on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 05:13:42 AM AEST
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"The heavy lashes blink and close
As labour lends them weight"
What a splendid
way
to describe an ended
day.
You always pick the perfect words.
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Re: To Herald Nocturnal Eve
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by MorguesMatter on
Sunday, 8th November 2009 @ 12:15:56 PM AEST
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| Your brew is natural, Your way is with words, felt this one deep-Morgues |
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