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Let me go
Contributed by
thesweetestsin65
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Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 09:24:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im sitting in my room thinking things through,
Focusing on anything to keep my mind off of you.
But its not working out because youre all I think about
Because Ive come to realize youre hard to live without.
All of my pain dwells within my heart,
As youre slowly but surely ripping it apart.
Im starting to miss you even more
Wishing you would walk through my door.
And what a crazy thing that would be,
If I finally had you here with me.
To taste your lips and touch your skin,
Well it would be the sweetest sin.
And its not fair that you hurt me this bad,
I didnt know you could make me this sad.
I didnt want to fall in love,
But you told me there was nothing to be scared of.
So here I am, lost and broken
Because of the words youve already spoken.
All Im asking is for you to let me go,
Dont keep me wondering and leave me all alone.
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2009-08-14 09:24:48]
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Re: Let me go
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 01:53:32 PM AEST
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Wow!
Seems like all the feelings of your broken heart
leaked out onto the screen.
I could really feel the pain as i read this and it had a good flow to. |
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Re: Let me go
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by Shattered_soul on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 03:46:29 PM AEST
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ive been through this.
some of the hardest things
are remembering the best times you had.
but be strong
and you will surely love again. |
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Re: Let me go
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by mrpeanut64 on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 06:16:35 PM AEST
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| very heartfelt, and well written. |
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