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Break The Sky
Contributed by
FragileStrength
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Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 01:33:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm dying day by day
but no one cries for me.
I tried cutting myself
but they won't watch me bleed.
Ingesting flesh and bone makes me a cannibal,
just because I'm screaming don't mean I'm sharing.
Or am I a criminal?
You say that I am wrong
but that doesn't mean you're right.
Humming doves are in my chest,
you'll have to break my heart to see them take flight.
Before the world dies at my feet
I will break the sky.
And all the tears that we have cried
will suck back in our eyes.
There is no price tag on my conscience,
my world is evil but american made.
Your eyes have been made empty
like all the promises you gave.
Why do I need anyone else,
when I can break the sky myself?
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FragileStrength
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2009-08-14 13:33:50]
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Re: Break The Sky
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by orphani on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 02:38:28 PM AEST
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triumphant essay of strength and courage
well composed / good structure
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Re: Break The Sky
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by shelby on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 09:02:57 PM AEST
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This has so many levels in it.
Good work here, keep on writing!
The ending is so liberating!
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Re: Break The Sky
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by LadyRose on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 07:07:25 AM AEST
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I dont know what to take out of this........I will take the first 2 lines than "I am dying day by day but no one cries for me" I love those lines, no one sees yorur suffering.........feel like that sometimes....otherwise there is alot more to take from this poem...
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Re: Break The Sky
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by blackrose233 on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 09:15:01 AM AEST
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| I like the image and metephores, there are many feelings that come up in reading this, its powerful nice write. |
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