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Sin's First Regret
Contributed by
NoUserNameAvailable
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Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 06:19:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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She lays entrenched in crimson
The liquid sliding from every
Pale curve of her skin
And it's so beautiful
And it's so ugly
She was never innocent
That pleasure long gone
From her vindictive hands
And it's so perfect
And it's so wrong
She used to hate life
The pain too much to bear
When it slipped down her wrists
And it's so beautiful
And it's so ugly
She was a conundrum
The one last puzzle
I wished to solve
And it's so damn perfect
And it's so damn wrong
And I broke her before I could solve her
And I regret it
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Re: Sin's First Regret
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by shelby on
Friday, 14th August 2009 @ 08:56:17 PM AEST
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I loved the entire write but the last two lines just hit me! Very good work.
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Re: Sin's First Regret
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by ClayMan on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 03:54:03 AM AEST
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| Beautiful expression of emotive perception. I love it it was great reading it! |
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