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the leaf
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 04:03:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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jottings of a madwoman
come up
so quickly
scared
frightened
paper alive
delicate
tissue-thin
web
spider I
on the main
thread
to come
back to
peaceful
communion
of a
new
blank page.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-08-15 04:03:36]
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Re: the leaf
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by orphani on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 05:31:10 AM AEST
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i like the way this poem builds up anxiety
with short pictograms of thought
then lets you back down to express the emotion behind the premise.
loved your imigery "spider on the main thread"
well done.
o |
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Re: the leaf
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by elle on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 01:40:33 PM AEST
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peaceful
communion
of a
new
blank page. . .
I live for this.
Well done! elle:) |
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