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I Dream Of Red
Contributed by
NoUserNameAvailable
on
Saturday, 15th August 2009 @ 11:32:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Laying
Waiting for the moments to fall to
Darkness
And whisk me away to the
Nightmares
That flow through my
Mind
And keep at ebb the good
Dreams
Which have been
Locked
Since death has
Befallen
The angels of
Lore
But tonight is
Different
Tonight I dream of
Red
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NoUserNameAvailable
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2009-08-15 23:32:41]
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Re: I Dream Of Red
(User Rating: 1 )
by kye on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 01:58:10 PM AEST
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I liked the arrangement. Thought it read well and was complemented by your choice of words. It read so well that I felt like my mind was hitting the return key at the end of each sentence.
Well done.
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Re: I Dream Of Red
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 10:24:02 AM AEST
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The arrangement certainly has potential because it intensifies the single word standing alone. Keep plugging away.
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