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In Love With Your Evil
Contributed by
no1special
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Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 01:17:48 PM in AEST
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In love with your evil i tell you no lie enchanted by you i shant deny,
at your beckon call i'm designed to be seduced by the lure of loves
misery . . .
In love with your evil resigned to your spell not knowing the difference
'twix heaven or hell, how can i love what i know i should hate my heart
you have mangled with your twisted faith . . .
You come and you go but never you stay while i was rehersing you
you canceled our play, what was it about you i never saw? that now
makes me hope i see you no more . . .
In love with your evil you habor within just looking at you is commiting
sin, so why do i do it what is it i seek? for even the strongest with you
would grow weak . . .
Now i am empty infested with pain you've made this flower grow hateful
of rain, but soon i will heal as everything must then i'll be the wind and
you'll, be the dust . . .
no1special
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Re: In Love With Your Evil
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by orphani on
Sunday, 16th August 2009 @ 01:40:35 PM AEST
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good use of meterd rhyme
shant--line 1 better shall not.
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Re: In Love With Your Evil
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 01:13:41 AM AEST
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I don't think I have ever thought "ouch" so hauntingly.Your heart has a tongue of its very own and my oh my,how sharp it can be.I LOVE IT!
"Now i am empty infested with pain you've made this flower grow hateful
of rain, but soon i will heal as everything must then i'll be the wind and
you'll, be the dust . . ."
Exquisite!
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