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Poison Proud
Contributed by
BrokenSkin
on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 03:24:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Without a prayer, without a care
You rot in your unconscious lair
Within your mind you creep, you purge
Unsettled in begotten curse
Blackened hearts forget me not
Shaded eyes you have forgot
The blood in mind is thick and bright
Lungs that breathe and sleep at night
Filth is dark and you are deep
Down in dirt you loathe to keep
But yet you do, and do you still
Embrace the love your sure to kill
Laughs are heard with you in thought
A joke is all you ever brought
Not to smile, but in disgust
For love you tortured into dust
Foolish clown, poison proud
Clueless in your thunder cloud
Check the mirrors, hit the breaks
Existence, just one big mistake
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BrokenSkin
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2009-08-19 03:24:40]
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Re: Poison Proud
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 02:50:05 PM AEST
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Great write! I feel for the entire situation. . . "for love you tortured into dust" such a strong assertion. . .
You'd hope one such as this would recover from total selfishness. Every life has it's frailties & flaws,
which hopefully can be turned around to the better. Unfortunately, some just change vices ( I mean this
figuretively & concretely) for as many trespasses as we commit on others. . . so we commit unto ourselves.
Many times life shows us what we absolutely don't want to be! peace. elle :) |
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Re: Poison Proud
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 05:37:47 AM AEST
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Filth is Dark and you are Deep!!!! OOOOh!! It gives me goosebumps to read it!!! This is Fantastic!!! GReat flow and use of words!! The last line is excellent too, sounds like several of my own pieces!!
Keep up the good work!!
Keep Writing and Keep Sharing!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana |
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