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The Battle
Contributed by
jessb3
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Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 08:43:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Locked in a battle with my head and my heart
I try to keep it together but then it all falls apart
You can't see the damage that's inflicting my soul
You can't see how I'm spinning, spinning out of control
Wondering aimlessly with thoughts in my head
Thinking about you, the thoughts turning to dread
With every step forward, I walk back two steps more
I'm stuck in a labyrinth and I can't find the door
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2009-08-19 20:43:52]
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Re: The Battle
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 10:15:33 PM AEST
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to the point and emotionally powerful. a good description of life's complicated puzzles/problems. the answers will arrive sooner or later... it's up to u to decide, good luck...
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Re: The Battle
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by ammar on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 11:07:12 PM AEST
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Brief yet expressive. An excellent write.
Peace
Ammar |
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