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Roller Coaster
Contributed by
Sosoftly
on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 08:38:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Going up
Relaxed; peaceful
Going up
Joy is plentiful
As we rise
I look in your eyes
Love is sparkling; reassuring
It seems everlasting.
Suddenly we fall
Screams fill the air
The winds pull my hair
It forces tears to fall.
Fear takes over
Will we fall forever?
A crash comes to mind.
The sparkle, I can no longer find.
Just when I expect to collide
I see the sky;
The sun shines with hope
While we go back up the slope.
Eternal ride
Ceaseless ups and downs;
I think I'm going to be sick.
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Sosoftly
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2009-08-20 08:38:51]
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by elle on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 12:57:42 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. . . I can relate. elle :) |
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 10:02:35 PM AEST
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I loved the whirl within the verse.
Nicely written poem, I also relate.
Michelle |
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